Walking
along a life’s empty path,
On
a dull, wet and warm afternoon
Rain
and shine playing hide-n-seek,
Drenching
and drying all the gloom.
The
weak sunlight showing up now,
Trying
hard to swab the wet solitude
My
thoughts wander back into time
When
you and I had none to intrude.
The
lovely downpour and a torn umbrella
The
gusty wind snatching it the harder I clasp,
With
you beside, those were the lovely rains
Four
hands ‘gether the umbrella would grasp.
Soon
the monsoon sun reluctantly hides
Slowly
the afternoon gets dull and lazy
As
the empty path too nears the end
All
the past’s landscapes turn hazy.
Venkatesh
Kumar © 2012

Very nicely written! :)
ReplyDeleteLove monsoons!
Thanks Priyanka. A word from you means a lot to me. :)
Deleteso lovely and sad, venks, lovely each stanza... i'm feeling kinda wet reading it, as today is muggy and rainy and sad here too. i need to take a walk on a solitary path and remember better days. xoxoox
ReplyDeleteThanks Laura for feeling the feel. :)
ReplyDeletereally beautiful ... the expressions looks like a painting .. every phase is like a posture ..
ReplyDeleteall the best sir
Thanks a ton Mercy. Am glad you felt the poem.
DeleteThanks a ton Mercy. Am glad you felt the poem.
Delete"All the past’s landscapes turn hazy." How it arouses the longing for the past pastures....beautiful poem !!
ReplyDeleteThank you Sunita. I am humbled
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